It is important to note that my parents always obeyed the state, but they lost their loyalty as they lost their identity.
The restricted conditions which forced my family to hide their identity, forced us to exile into a strange country, but in hope for a promised land.
(Shklar, 184) These are all characters that enhance a person's beliefs and values, and are very essential to one's personality, and, most importantly, affect the person's judgment regarding loyalty.
The above mentioned characteristics also give the individual a sense of 'identity' (if this is a quote from the article, it needs to be referenced).
If obligation is rule driven, loyalty is motivated by the entire personality of an agent.Politics has formed its behavior into a universal religion, where its faith depends on loyalty and obligation. Comments: ur last argument was very well written...made up very well might I add :) neways, I hope my comments help, cuz sometimes I really didn't no how to change some if without really knowing wat the article was about. Introduction Leaving home Note: I think u should define the authors definition of obligation and loyalty in the introduction or ur understanding of their definitions in terms of ur thesis cuz sometimes its hard to understand the difference b/w the two.that shouldn't really happen cuz that is the focus of ur essay Red: corrections (make sure u read the sentence wit read stuff cuz the whole sentence had to change sometimes) Blue: comments Yellow highlight: erase those things (not needed) Leaving home is a difficult choice for any individual to make.A decision of this caliber contains conditions of no obligation, enforced obligation, and obligation in conflict with loyalty.Political loyalty is evoked by nations, ethnic groups, churches, parties, and by doctraines, causes, ideologies, or faiths that form and identify associations." (Shklar, 184).Thus, loyalty is deeply affective and not primarily rational.This is how I ended up in POL81A at the University of Toronto.My parents packed up everything they had worked hard for over the last twenty-four years and migrated to Canada.Though there are many unconditional matters to be questioned, the focus of this essay will be on the in my interest to structure (structure of wat, exile?) and define the chosen reasons for exile argued in Shklar's article.